I am living
between
If you stay
or
If you leave
I am surviving
between
with
or
without you
I face two paths
and travel
none
For you are still in my life
but not really
And you are out of my life
but not quite
I am living
between
If you stay
or
If you leave
I am surviving
between
with
or
without you
I face two paths
and travel
none
For you are still in my life
but not really
And you are out of my life
but not quite
short, simple, to the point and a deeper delve in follow up work but like this one keep it simple to connect as widely as possible- the sign of a classic anything. as i have said in comments to others that my critique i try to make with thought and i would love to a see a connected poems led off of this one
wow! this is a classic- you’ve got a style quite unlike many i have read…