Living With or Without You


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I am living

between

If you stay

or

If you leave

I am surviving

between

with

or

without you

I face two paths

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and travel

none

For you are still in my life

but not really

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And you are out of my life

but not quite

2 thoughts on “Living With or Without You

  1. short, simple, to the point and a deeper delve in follow up work but like this one keep it simple to connect as widely as possible- the sign of a classic anything. as i have said in comments to others that my critique i try to make with thought and i would love to a see a connected poems led off of this one

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